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    September 07

    梦

    微微吹拂的秋风，
    轻轻漫过耳旁。
    丝丝凉意，
    融入梦乡。
     
    向往的女孩，
    渐渐走进我的心房。
    轻轻地……
    怯怯地……
    柔柔地……
    怦然心动。
     
    温柔的目光，
    满是清澈。
    清澈的宛如一汪泉水，
    清泉中荡起一丝涟漪，
    似回忆，
    似怀恋！
     
    梦醒时分，
    佳人已去。
    只剩下那浓浓的思恋，
    剪不断、
    理还乱！
     
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    飘香wrote:
     
    梦里相聚欢
    醒时独怅然
    Sept. 11
    卓－－希wrote:
    to:Sissi     谢谢哦～可惜她是不看的，世界上最珍贵的永远是得不到的……
    to：清       先谢谢夸奖～不过，有梦想就是有目标啊……小孩子，不懂的！
    to：猫老板，加油赚钱哦~！   情诗？一般般吧，我只是写自己的一些想法而已～
    to：迷儿     没有关系的，我不介意，哈哈～你怎么知道我是天蝎座的？？？？
    Sept. 11
    儿 迷wrote:
    汗....对于那个威胁先道歉一翻....
    呵呵.天蝎男子.请多谅解哦:)
    今天刚回来.坐不到你的沙发呢~~~~
    祝你快乐呀;)
    晚安
    Sept. 11
    婧钦 王wrote:
    情诗～！～
    挖哈哈～～～～！
    Sept. 10
    清wrote:
    看你的照片，长的挺好一小伙子，咋老是写做梦呢！！！
    费解~~~
    Sept. 10
    Sissi Swrote:
    呵呵，估计那个姑娘看了得美死了~~这么深情的~哈哈
    写的真好，看得我心都快化了。。。~嘿嘿
    Sept. 10
    卓－－希wrote:
    to：落花水面  涂鸦之作，贻笑大方了～
    to：猫老板，加油赚钱哦~！  有空去看看了
    to：文轩   应该是爱人啊，可惜……
    to：死不了  哪里哪里……
    Sept. 10
    兢业 王wrote:
    写地好,有才
    Sept. 9
    文轩 ～wrote:
    梦忆故人~
    好一首情诗啊~
    Sept. 9
    婧钦 王wrote:
    来拉，来拉～！
    写的不错～！
    我的照片相册上有的，只是很少拉，呵呵
    什么时候弄个写真上去～！让你看个够吧～！
    还有为什么是８０分呢，至少也要９９分吧～！
    Sept. 9
    落花水面 Hiwrote:
    呵呵，好一首温柔的情诗，美丽的梦！集现代诗与古诗与一体呢，梦想成真哦^_^
    Sept. 8
    卓－－希wrote:
    TO:沐恩堂  美梦是不用费心思去留的，现实才是无奈的！
    to：清       风情万众？是形式多样的意思吗？如果是，我就明白了！
    to：勿飞_月影深蓝   但是，离去的佳人并不清晰，朦朦胧胧的……
    to：迷儿     你的空间有人威胁我哦……呵呵，谢谢
    Sept. 8
    儿 迷wrote:
    还是这样的爱写诗呢~~呵呵
    VERY GOOD。
    NICE。
                  祝快乐呀：）
    Sept. 7
    勿飞 ☆wrote:
    既然这样就用一汪清澈的心去对待吧
    Sept. 7
    清wrote:
    看你写的，乍看风情万众，其实，呵呵，你自己心里明白。
    Sept. 7
    甜甜wrote:
    还是留住美梦吧,它一定比现实更让人向往......
    永远剪不断,永远不用理,就当它是心灵的一汪清泉,随时可以走进它,享受微微涟漪、清澈如月。。。
    Sept. 7

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